Monday, November 23, 2009

Hw-25 Comments on Short Stories

Part 1:
christian said...

Chris,

I enjoyed your story because I felt it represented the stereotypical cool person as the lame person compared to the father who was the "real cool" person.

Throughout your story you build the apparent "real cool" person as someone who doesn't have enough time for himself, but makes time for the more important personal things in life. The stereotypical cool guy was only showed as a flashy guy but did not show much appreciation towards the kids.

At the very end you completed your story to question what is really cool, the guy with the motorcycle? Or the one who cares and spends most of his time with his kids.





christian said...



Hi Yurelis,
Your story I felt represented criteria of how teenagers become cool. I feel this way because in your story, you explained how the new girl gained her friends by being the supposed "bad ass" with teachers disrespecting them and then having new things that are popular, such as the Blackberry phone.

In the end though, the materialistic criteria of becoming the cool teenager is shutdown because the new girl does not gain new friends.

I look forward to your future blogs about your interpretation of cool and how you explain it.


Hi Kiana,

Your story reminded me of how our class talked about conformity. In your story you wrote about how the teen tried to be cool in many different ways, but still could not get in on the "in-crowd." In our society, we also try be unique in our own special way, but it always ends up as something someone else has, but just a little different. In your story, your character struggles with this.

I look forward to reading future blogs about the criteria and constant conformity of "cool" that you expressed in this blog.






christian said...



What up C-Sinnot,

haha, I really enjoyed the humor and almost everyday scenarios in your short story. The characters, the materials and the situations that happen all in this short story get straight to the point of the "stereotypical cool guy" the doosh-bag.
"Hey man you know what else is foul?" Tom looked confused. "Sticking your nose in other peoples business." Such a doosh-bag statement.

I look forward to more humorous blogs that also explain your interpretation of "cool."





Hey Chloe,

I think you have a very interesting and real-like story that throws out a theme of honesty that is represented in a cool manner.

What I took from your story was a person who represented their "coolness" through avoiding others and not giving a damn about others that surrounded her. Almost like saying, better then everyone. I also think your use of materialistic attributes such as the faux leather, chunky boots and black eyeliner built your character as the kind of person "who knows their cool, but you should already know that."

I can't wait for more interesting and honest interpretation of cool you are going to express in the future.

Part 2:

In the Short stories that I have read and commented on, most of them have the appear-cool being shutdown by real-cool. It's a pattern that comes up a lot in each story and even mine because I think in our society we shoot for the more settle and underdog type of people as the "chill or cool people" of our society. To those of the appear-cool personalities, most of us I think we cannot relate too so we end up siding more with the "real-cools."

Popular elements of cool that arise in these short stories are the materialistic things that makes someone cool. For example in Chris and Chloe's story, they both describe their appear-cool characters with some sort of wealth and the leather jacket (bad ass) look. As for the "real-cool" people, the underdog's, there's more honesty and commitment to them which makes them the cool.

Wednesday, November 18, 2009

Short Story Hw- 24

Dean walked into his class late with a relaxed walk with his chest and chin directed up. His eyes focused the other end of the class avoiding any other eyes. In the midst of a whole class discussion, Dean made his way slowly to his seat giving everyone handshakes and head nods. The teacher eyeing every movement Dean made, he felt uneasy. Annoyed by Dean's slow movement, the teacher abruptly spoke out;
"Dean, make your way to your seat in a timely fashion, your late."
Dean quickly replied.
"I'm already at my seat; Marks."
Dean sat in his seat, focused his attention to every one's faces which focused directly on him.
"What the fuck are you looking at bitches? Direct your eyes somewhere else faggots."
"Dean leave my class right now! I'll meet you out there."
Dean noisily got up, shoved his way through every seat that past him and violently opened and slammed it after. Mr. Marks followed.
"Dean, I'm done with you, There are camera's in my room. Your mom is gonna' love seeing that video; punk."
(murmurs) "fuck."

Monday, November 16, 2009

Hw 23 Cool Unit

Cool, what does it mean and I'm not talking about the literal sense. How do you define a person as cool? What are the exact criteria of becoming cool? All questions to understand teenage popularity. And even popularity should have differences on being cool.

I believe the main parts of being cool, is being consistent. Being consistent comes with conformity, which in our society is very popular. Constant conformity has happened for many generations and has changed overtime because of the "coolness" it acquired. Constant conformity is still very popular to this day because of how our society changes. For example the movement from very baggy jeans, to a more fitted attitude. Our generation of music has also changed especially, the very popular and overdue Auto tune. Before our society was completely into robotic singing voices, we were into great singers. Singers like Bill Withers, Tina Turner, Led Zepplin and Pink Floyd etc. But now that generation of music is dying out, and to now, listening to it is not considered cool. What is considered cool in our generation is now like Kanye West singing through auto tune or very pop like music such as Britney Spears.

There are other parts of becoming cool not solely on just being consistent but also like how you build your image. What I mean by building an image is more of how you represent yourself, either through lies or truth's. I think most of the image people build today, like such celebrities are through lies; for example the rap artist, Lil Wayne builds his image through toughness by exaggerating his street life. To even a more extended version of building images, "...history is made out of [popular] liars" (CallofDutyModernWarfare2). War between man, only one man can win, so only one truth comes through and not the other side, so the whole truth isn't told. So that one man's truth becomes popular and everyone believes it, which I think is a criteria of being cool.

I think also believability has a lot to due with how to become cool. If noone was able to trust or believe what one told them, why does it matter to listen to that person? Trust built in relationships builds you an image of where people can trust, and when your trusted enough, I feel it should be considered as 'cool.'

One wandering question I have for 'Cool' is; can there be only one exact answer for it? and chill, not the literal sense either.
For you smart asses, here's the definition of the literal sense:
Neither warm nor very cold; moderately cold: fresh, cool water; a cool autumn evening
http://www.thefreedictionary.com/cool

Sunday, November 15, 2009

Art Project


The art I created reflects as a mirror to society because it shows the common popularity's that arise in teenage minds or even adults. For example the most popular social networks are drawn in to the anonymous person's mind to represent that majority of the time, teenagers or even adults only think about what new digital friend he/she has made.

The art I drew makes me think about how much time daily I spend using digital technology and how much it has taken over my thoughts. This also makes me think about how many other individuals like me, have the same exact thoughts about the digital age taking over.

The most interesting aspect my art provided is the message of reading text or people are non existent when digital representations have taken over the body and mind. I felt a need to express this issue in a drawn picture because of the popularity digital technology has grown into our society and with great success too. And with great success comes great heartache. And the heartache is reality.

Sunday, November 8, 2009

Digital Technology Paper

EQ: How does digital technology better society?

Introduction:
In our generations, we have come to appreciate the digital devices that have come up making life easier. In our past, the movement and connection between different countries, and or even people had taken a long time to connect with each other because of the lack in advance digital devices. For example, if Paul Revere, the American, most famous for his night-time alerts of the British movement, could have simply been easier if he made a phone call, but that was in the late 1700's. Today, I find myself embracing the cool, advance digital devices that are being made to make things quick and easy. The convenience of digital technology has provided easier connection and communication with society due to Cell phones, TV and Social Networks.

Argument 1:
Our society has always relied on cell phones to quickly connect ourselves with people from long distances. I have a Cell phone and I use it almost everyday, because I do not have to struggle throughout the day trying to contact someone. Cell phones, which was first invented in 1973 by Dr. Martin Cooper changed the communication industry for good. Because of his development of the first cell phone, today we have the opportunity to commit to either job interviews or simply contact an old friend. People claim that cell phones have taken over lives and that because of that, we are not able to be aware of reality because we are casually "yapping" away. That's just one negative, but what about the many possible positives? Mary E., A mobile cell phone user, has praised the invention of cell phones because of the possible and threatening tragedy that could of happen to her granddaughter. "… three men tried to kidnap my 14 year old granddaughter. A motorist who was passing by, saw the struggle, she stopped, blew her car horn, and said she was calling 911 on her cell phone; my granddaughter was able to escape and ran home." (Mary E.) In emergency, a cell phone dialed to 911 was able to save Mary E.'s granddaughter, which conveniently caused the three men to allow the victim to run away. Now imagine if cell phones weren't around and 911 could not be dialed, Mary E. would probably not have been to able to see her granddaughter get away. Emergency phone calls are definitely convenient when one is in harms way, or in trouble because then it is possible for people to become saved, in this case Mary's granddaughter. Not only are cell phones conveniently great in emergency, but if worst comes to happen to someone, "Cell phones also have a great tracking device on them. It is a very important service to have…it can be used to tract missing or lost persons." (Mary E.) Cell phones can be used in many different ways positively that everyone seems to miss out on. They are fooled because of the little problems such as texting which distracts people from reality.

Cell phones you can also consider has removed the use of writing and sending letters. Before cell phones, writing letters to people were popular because it was a way to contact someone without leaving your home. Letters were nice, but took to long to reach the other person, and who knew if your letter even made it to that person. With cell phones, this shortened that time by a lot. Cell phones can contact another cell phone within 5-30 seconds, a letter could take up to 1 to whenever amount of days it takes to reach the next person. Cell phones has conveniently helped our society today by making communication with others faster and easier than it was in the past.


Argument 2:
Television plays a huge part in society that has conveniently helped the world see what happens in other parts of the world we did not of. TV, a world-wide phenomenon, since 1934, has been able to keep us in contact nationally and internationally with interesting topics because of shows like "CNN" or "NBC" because they provide coverage to issues we alone my not of heard of. People believe that television has very strong negative attributes, it causes disembodiment with kids and adults because we are so engaged with what is on screen. But what about books? Books can also be considered as a threat because that too can cause disembodiment because our minds are focused on reading and understanding the text. Well, then people might argue back, that when we read books, we are also using our brain and in television you do not. I beg to disagree.

In "Everything Bad is Good for you", by Steven Johnson he brought up good points about how digital technology is good for us that not many people like to argue. He explained how television shows complexity that began in the 80's have helped us understand even more complex shows present day. Mostly he talked about multithreading which is how TV shows with complex narrative stories kept people watching, and TV shows with single-plot narrative stories held viewers for a short while. "…the first screening of Hill Street [(a complex narrative show)] pilot in may 1980 brought complaints from viewers that the show was too complicated. Fast forward twenty years and shows like The Sopranos engage their audience with narratives that make Hill Street look like Three's Company."(Everything Bad is Good for you, Johnson) Conveniently without us ever really realizing it, people have become more opened and I think smarter because after two decades of exposure with complex narrative shows we the capacity to understand complex plots. This has bettered our society because multithreaded dramas are present in books and televisions and because of our exposure to it in the 80's to now, we've learned how to understand it.

Argument 3:
Since 1985, the first online social network made, has kept people in contact with others without sending a letter or calling them. It has been used as the quickest and easiest way to contact a person and conveniently, one can now get it in on their cell phone too. Social Networks are built on online communities by providing a system to find people who you just met or someone you met years ago. I believe social networks have made a positive change in society because I believe it has connected us more to the people we are surrounded by. "…the Internet has now allowed this circle of friends and colleagues to span the entire globe, and provided people are careful to use the Internet in moderation and in balance, these social networks will only serve to enhance human relationships, and to benefit society…"(LoveToKnow corp.) Now if only people could get past the fact that, yes social networks can lead to massive amount of time on the computer, but it is only to build relationships outside.


Opposing Viewpoints:
Although digital devices have conveniently made a difference in society, people also argue, that it has also made us lazy. Like television and social networks, it has created a massive amount of time consumed by sitting down and detachment from society. Social Networks has "…hurt society is through the obsession factor. This kind of excessive computer use can quickly lead to a dysfunctional lifestyle where other important daily activities, such as exercise, maintaining healthy sleeping and eating habits, and spending time with family and friends, are almost completely ignored."(LoveToKnow corp.) This is all based upon the strength of mind on the human being not being able to control oneself, for a fact I know myself to be on social networks for quite amount of time, but I have control over myself so I think it really depends on the person. Even though all that was described as a side effect of social networking was negative, study shows "…that most children who spent time conducting computer-based activities spent no less time on activities such as reading, sports or outside play than children without home computers."(LoveToKnow corp.) So what does that say about social networks, it cannot be all negative.

Television, another culprit of negatively impacting society is represented by mass studies of how it makes us lazy and detaches us from reality. One of the most main and common argument for it is; it stops us from doing "…fruitful and healthy activities like exercise or reading."(Buzzle.com) I always disagree with statements like this, but some of it is true because mass studies exemplify the fact that people become lazy. One thing I do not understand is, why can't reading be put in the same category as Television? In reading, we sit in one spot and we focus our brains in one general area, and we make sense of the text we read. Same way with television. But I believe television has helped us better understand hard text because of the constant exposure to multithreading, which is conveniently provided by TV programs, for example E.R. or 24.


Conclusion:
But do you really argue convenience with laziness? I guess. Making something quick and easier in some people's eyes is considered lazy. But why challenge yourself and make something harder if there is an easy way out of it. In my eyes, I think it is brilliant that someone invented a phone, because then I would not have to wait for them to send a letter. Just dial their phone number. I think it is brilliant that they invented social networks, now I do not have to dial, I just type. All making things, easier and quicker. Digital devices have bettered our society because of today's technology which conveniently makes things much quicker and easier.



Sites/Text used:

http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/247569/cell_phones_necessity_or_convenience_pg2_pg2.html?cat=12

Everything Bad is Good for you: By, Steven Johnson

http://socialnetworking.lovetoknow.com/Are_Social_Networks_Harmful_to_Society

http://www.buzzle.com/articles/negative-effects-of-television.html

Thursday, November 5, 2009

Mini Exhibition Revised

In our generations, we have come to appreciate the digital devices that have come up making life easier. In our past, the movement and connection between different countries, and or even people had taken a long time to connect with each other because of the lack in advance digital devices. For example, if Paul Revere, the American, most famous for his night-time alerts of the British movement, could have simply been easier if he made a phone call, but that was in the late 1700's. Today, I find myself embracing the cool, advance digital devices that are being made to make things quick and easy. The convenience of digital technology has provided easier connection and communication with the world due to Cell phones, TV and Social Networks.


Our society has always relied on cell phones to quickly connect ourselves with people from long distances. I have a Cell phone and I use it almost everyday, because I do not have to struggle throughout the day trying to contact someone. Cell phones, which was first invented in 1973 by Dr. Martin Cooper changed the communication industry for good. Because of his development of the first cell phone, today we have the opportunity to commit to either job interviews or simply contact an old friend. People claim that cell phones have taken over lives and that because of that, we are not able to be aware of reality because we are casually "yapping" away. That's just one negative, but what about the many possible positives? Mary E., A mobile cell phone user, has praised the invention of cell phones because of the possible and threatening tragedy that could of happen to her granddaughter. "… three men tried to kidnap my 14 year old granddaughter. A motorist who was passing by, saw the struggle, she stopped, blew her car horn, and said she was calling 911 on her cell phone; my granddaughter was able to escape and ran home." (Mary E.) In emergency, a cell phone dialed to 911 was able to save Mary E.'s granddaughter, which conveniently caused the motorists to be warned and scared off. Now imagine if cell phones weren't around and 911 could not be dialed, Mary E. would probably not have been to able to see her granddaughter get away. Emergency phone calls are definitely convenient when one is in harm, or known to be trouble because then it is possible for people to become saved, in this case Mary's granddaughter. Not only are cell phones conveniently great in emergency, but if worst comes to happen to someone, "Cell phones also have a great tracking device on them. It is a very important service to have…it can be used to tract missing or lost persons." (Mary E.) Cell phones can be used in many different ways positively that everyone seems to miss out on. They are fooled because of the little problems such as texting which distracts people from reality.


Cell phones you can also consider has removed the use of writing and sending letters. Before cell phones, writing letters to people were popular because it was a way to contact someone without leaving your home. Letters were nice, but took to long to reach the other person, and who knew if your letter even made it to that person. With cell phones, this shortened that time by a lot. Cell phones can contact another cell phone within 5-30 seconds, a letter could take up to 1 to whenever amount of days it takes to reach the next person. Cell phones has conveniently helped our society today by making communication with others faster and easier than it was in the past.


Television plays a huge part in society that has conveniently helped the world see what happens in other parts of the world we did not of. TV, a world-wide phenomenon, since 1934, has been able to keep us in contact nationally and internationally with interesting topics because of shows like "CNN" or "NBC" because they provide coverage to issues we alone my not of heard of. People believe that television has very strong negative attributes, it causes disembodiment with kids and adults because we are so engaged with what is on screen. But what about books? Books can also be considered as a threat because that too can cause disembodiment because our minds are focused on reading and understanding the text. Well, then people might argue back, that when we read books, we are also using our brain and in television you do not. I beg to disagree. In "Everything Bad is Good for you", by Steven Johnson he brought up good points about how digital technology is good for us that not many people like to argue. He explained how television shows complexity that began in the 80's have helped us understand even more complex shows present day. Mostly he talked about multithreading which is how TV shows with complex narrative stories kept people watching, and TV shows with single-plot narrative stories held viewers for a short while. "…the first screening of Hill Street [(a complex narrative show)] pilot in may 1980 brought complaints from viewers that the show was too complicated. Fast forward twenty years and shows like The Sopranos engage their audience with narratives that make Hill Street look like Three's Company."(Everything Bad is Good for you, Johnson) Conveniently without us ever really realizing it, people have become more opened and I think smarter because after two decades of exposure with complex narrative shows we the capacity to understand complex plots. This has bettered our society because multithreaded dramas are present in books and televisions and because of our exposure to it in the 80's to now, we've learned how to understand it.


Since 1985, the first online social network made, has kept people in contact with others without sending a letter or calling them. It has been used as the quickest and easiest way to contact a person and conveniently, one can now get it in on their cell phone too. Social Networks are built on online communities by providing a system to find people who you just met or someone you met years ago. I believe social networks have made a positive change in society because I believe it has connected us more to the people we are surrounded by. "…the Internet has now allowed this circle of friends and colleagues to span the entire globe, and provided people are careful to use the Internet in moderation and in balance, these social networks will only serve to enhance human relationships, and to benefit society…"(LoveToKnow corp.) Now if only people could get past the fact that, yes social networks can lead to massive amount of time on the computer, but it is only to build relationships outside.


Although digital devices have conveniently made a difference in society, people also argue, that it has also made us lazy. Like television and social networks, it has created a massive amount of time consumed by sitting down and detachment from society. Social Networks has "…hurt society is through the obsession factor. This kind of excessive computer use can quickly lead to a dysfunctional lifestyle where other important daily activities, such as exercise, maintaining healthy sleeping and eating habits, and spending time with family and friends, are almost completely ignored."(LoveToKnow corp.) This is all based upon the strength of mind on the human being not being able to control oneself, for a fact I know myself to be on social networks for quite amount of time, but I have control over myself so I think it really depends on the person. Even though all that was described as a side effect of social networking was negative, study shows "…that most children who spent time conducting computer-based activities spent no less time on activities such as reading, sports or outside play than children without home computers."(LoveToKnow corp.) So what does that say about social networks, it cannot be all negative.


Television, another culprit of negatively impacting society is represented by mass studies of how it makes us lazy and detaches us from reality. One of the most main and common argument for it is; it stops us from doing "…fruitful and healthy activities like exercise or reading."(Buzzle.com) I always disagree with statements like this, but some of it is true because mass studies exemplify the fact that people become lazy. One thing I do not understand is, why can't reading be put in the same category as Television? In reading, we sit in one spot and we focus our brains in one general area, and we make sense of the text we read. Same way with television. But I believe television has helped us better understand hard text because of the constant exposure to multithreading, which is conveniently provided by TV programs, for example E.R. or 24.


But do you really argue convenience with laziness? I guess. Making something quick and easier in some people's eyes is considered lazy. But why challenge yourself and make something harder if there is an easy way out of it. In my eyes, I think it is brilliant that someone invented a phone, because then I would not have to wait for them to send a letter. Just dial their phone number. I think it is brilliant that they invented social networks, now I do not have to dial, I just type. All making things, easier and quicker. Digital devices have bettered our society because of today's technology which conveniently makes things much quicker and easier.



Sites/Text used:
http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/247569/cell_phones_necessity_or_convenience_pg2_pg2.html?cat=12
Everything Bad is Good for you: By, Steven Johnson
http://socialnetworking.lovetoknow.com/Are_Social_Networks_Harmful_to_Society
http://www.buzzle.com/articles/negative-effects-of-television.html

Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Big paper 1 Suggestions

I cannot paste comments at the moment.

Please check Yurelis R. blog for Big paper 1 suggestions.




Tuesday, November 3, 2009

Mini Exhibition Rough Draft

In our generations, we have come to appreciate the digital advances that has come up making life easier. In our past, movement and connection between different countries, and or even people had taken a long time to connect we each other. Today, the convenience of digital technology has provided easier connection with the world due to Cell phones, Tv and Social Networks.

Our society has always relied on cell phones to quickly connect ourselves with people from long distances. I have a Cell phone and I use it almost everyday, because I do not have to struggle throughout the day trying to contact someone.

Television plays a huge part in society that has conveniently helped the world see what happens in other parts of the world we did not of. Tv, a world-wide phenomenon, since 1934, has been able to keep us in contact national and international because of shows like "CNN" or "NBC" because they provide coverage to issues we alone my not of heard of.

Since 1985, the first online social network which has made, kept people in contact with other without sending a letter or calling them. It has been used as the quickest and easiest way to contact a person and conveniently you can now get in on your cell phone too.

Although digital devices have conveniently made a difference in society, people also argue, that it has also made us lazy. But do you really argue convenience with laziness? I guess. Making something quick and easier in some people's eyes is considered lazy. But why challenge yourself and make something harder if there is an easy way out of it. In my eyes, I think it is brilliant that someone invented a phone, because then I would not have to wait for them to send a letter. Just dial their phone number. I think it is brilliant that they invented social networks, now I do not have to dial, I just type. All making things, easier and quicker.

Digital devices have bettered our society because of today's technology which conveniently makes things much quicker and easier.

Monday, November 2, 2009

Comment to Digital Unit Outline's

christian said...

Kiana,

I really like your creative thesis #3 because you have more of a "show don't tell" thesis which draws a reader in more. Examples you could use to show addiction was our experiments we did and peoples reaction to it. That could show people's understanding of how much they either appreciate or dislike digital technology.

you could also talk about social networks and how that is addicting because it keeps people in contact with each mother faster then it is to make a phone call or send a letter. That makes us lazy, so thats a negative.

You could talk about "Feed" and the detachment the teens felt after losing their feed.

I look forward to seeing what thesis you end up choosing, but I think your 3rd thesis would be an excellent paper to write and expand about.

Sunday, November 1, 2009

Digital Unit Mini-Exhibition Outline

Eq: How has digital technology better society?

Thesis: The digital technology today has bettered our society for the better because it is convenient due to cell phones, Tv and social networks.

Argument 1: Social Networking

Digital technology has become so convenient to our present society because of the social networking. Social networking has been able to keep people in contact with others who they haven't seen in a longtime, or prepare themselves to meet each other the following day.

Argument 2: Tv

Digital technology has better our society because of Tv. Tv has helped us better understand complex narrative stories-(use the Everything bad is good for you)

Argument 3: Cell Phones

Digital technology has conveniently helped our society through shortening and giving us shortcuts communicating with other people in long distances.

Conclusion: Digital technology has definitely better our society even though many argue that it has been for the worse, but overall when we look at it, digital devices we've used has made things easier.